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kaycee commented on the post, Dreams...

This one is not good at all.

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kaycee commented on the post, Birthright - Chapter 2

Mary grabbed my wrists and jerked me awake. This would have better served as your first sentence. This is the kind of book I would like to edit. If you can pay, that is.

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kaycee commented on the post, You Must set Forth At Dawn By Wole Soyinka

@zikora. Thank you. I can’t bear to read this now. The punctuation is evil.

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kaycee commented on the post, You Must set Forth At Dawn By Wole Soyinka

@whyte, thanks for reading.

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kaycee commented on the post, The Making of a Local Champion

Very good one. Sometimes the local champions have no idea that they are mere local champs. Like some of these bloggers and even writers on NS who believe they are great because their friends say nice...

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kaycee commented on the post, Bounty Hunter -TheNakedConvos.com's The...

This is really good.

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kaycee commented on the post, Unbreak My Heart - EPISODE FOURTEEN

I cannot believe I actually started and finished a chick lit. The writer is very good. Can I entice this writer to leave chick lit and write something more…you know, something else?

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kaycee commented on the post, ● Two Halves Of A Tale ●

This is really good too.

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kaycee commented on the post, Words In The Wind...

I like the flow anyhow.

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kaycee commented on the post, Sunset

Good one.

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kaycee commented on the post, M.U.M- Miracle Unto Me:-

@ostar you used to be a very good poet. What happened?

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kaycee commented on the post, We know life gives a lemon

I like this one.

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kaycee commented on the post, "Mr Dele" - A Contemporary Nigerian story - 1

I know you spent time and some energy to write this, but you just have to delete it. It is neither a good story nor a well written work. WTF?

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kaycee commented on the post, Raise Your Hands

Nice one. Cross check the third stanza, it has some issues.

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kaycee commented on the post, I Don't Even Know What To Call It, Just Read...

Quite funny.

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kaycee commented on the post, Die! (Final Episode)

Nice enough. But it read like a summary. As if the writer was tired of the story.

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kaycee commented on the post, Blood On Satin Sheets; One

Overdo. Stop trying to impress your reader. Your first sentence for example was meaningless. If someone tells you something was “red satin with a scent of jasmine and a hint of rose and musk” what does...

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kaycee commented on the post, Blood On Satin Sheets; One

Mention me when you write again.

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kaycee commented on the post, Update: The Stars Come Out To Play With...

Where is that picture we took together? Is there any reason why you have adebantu and bankyw up there and no me??

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kaycee commented on the post, A Tale of Nonsense

*sigh*

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